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Re: Freestyle Production

Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Tue Jan 22, 2013 12:01 am

HeavenSunArcadez wrote:
MrJay83 wrote:other man crime revelation...

Like mental constipation
the King Kong on your back
realization that social
augmentation takes possession
of your mind and soul.

The consumed reality
chewed and crushed
under the Timbs,
Tar hands dream
touching the rimbs
Five Star Deli delivery
of hot sauce and
smoking ribs…

Food for the Five corners
of the world, seven
aspects of love,
three ways of spirit
dedicated to one life


been away for awhile but had to drop in to flow with the crew

"dedicated to one life"

thy medic state is elevated new unlike
spliced relic faceless devil ancients brewed on life's
crude sponged hive
of shrewd sung chimes

captivating' active blazing but practiced making
static breaking, cactus grazing madness waking

but dew drops harmonies, new props carbon freeze
loose cons pour in heat, of mute knots formed to squeeze

evolution in involuntary shiver, rebels putrid when impala carry bitter
glaring glitter, staring winters very inner, daring centers...
washed away in monstrous waves when pompous shades combust flames
and spread pollutions vicious howl of airy tremors , sparing tender...

diabolical aces in prophesy, flake when hypocrisy phases winds frolic breeze of mocked decree.... as it transits and piles a deposit so aimless hawked in sleep!

playing demolition derby weighing symbols within burning, preying frizzles stripped in whirling, day dream waiting gentle wishes hurry...

to be continued... Sun of Heaven

"daydream waiting gentle wishes hurry"

I stay clean waging missiles endless curving
wide spaced fiends phasing little timid flurries

vivid urging of minions scurry to finish worming
limitless burning mimicked with merging relentless burning

cultivating Neptune's Vessels meddling sick
in motive breaking thresh cruised echoes wrestling ships

I fish fry twin flies with stiff rhymes of enzymes
built by a sealed time of reeled wine and healed scythe

I play dug out with sand shrews and abbreviate metaphors
lay plugs down in lands view then alleviate the sweat of scorn

engulf set prisms in a hole in one, as the chosen son with the plasma golden gun
load it up, chrome with tusk .omen struck and set off stretched income the way im pulling stunts(/poll in lunch)

step foot on the queens castle, on a mean hassle from fiend capos with beams latched so streamed actual... a theme saxophones I bring battle .. as leaves tadpole the scenes gravel of greek chapels... screech zaps close ...trees trample ..seas drag foam, from beach pastels as Siege hacks Zones....
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Post  Le0 on Tue Jan 22, 2013 2:20 pm

*dapz* wb... "weeeee missed you" (Smyth, 2013) lol
The scripts are on point my dood. I must say I am thoroughly impressed. Aight let's go:

as Siege hacks Zones....

Thru the moans of the smokin' Buddha
Chamber dancin', angels clappin'
Accrue the tones of uh spoken ruler
Anger masked in danger's masked men

Eschew the zones of the token bruiser
Angles amassed when pain is lad's sin
Bless views, the bones of uh tokin' shooter
Planes are passed when I aim those clad pens

The best jewels from the Hoboken crooner
I sang flows of past kin that remain clothed in glass skin
Coalesce crews, psalms of the omen's root words
The rest lose, among the chosen tuitor

Ohm the sutra, poems that suit h.e.r. in forms that suit curs
From the future, horns that rooster, when formed that coup merged



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Re: Freestyle Production

Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Tue Jan 22, 2013 11:39 pm

Le0 wrote:*dapz* wb... "weeeee missed you" (Smyth, 2013) lol
The scripts are on point my dood. I must say I am thoroughly impressed. Aight let's go:

as Siege hacks Zones....

Thru the moans of the smokin' Buddha
Chamber dancin', angels clappin'
Accrue the tones of uh spoken ruler
Anger masked in danger's masked men

Eschew the zones of the token bruiser
Angles amassed when pain is lad's sin
Bless views, the bones of uh tokin' shooter
Planes are passed when I aim those clad pens

The best jewels from the Hoboken crooner
I sang flows of past kin that remain clothed in glass skin
Coalesce crews, psalms of the omen's root words
The rest lose, among the chosen tuitor

Ohm the sutra, poems that suit h.e.r. in forms that suit curs
From the future, horns that rooster, when formed that coup merged


Always a pleasure to be here, has to be my favorite place to be cause I can let loose with the words.... was reading your scripts and very impressed... threw some words and phrases in there that had deep simile and subtitled meaning and words I had to research to find the meaning of LOL... but very hot material here... I gotta keep it going....

alright look...

"From the future, horns that rooster, when formed that coup merged"

sponged from super spartan troopers winds storm cast mute surge
drenched in uproar from wicked hunts for
untouched rune pearls orange in fused splurge trimmed for acute girth
cryptic but Aura vivid on shore...

Sicilian reptilian crawl the sand streams of ghost valleys, on stone alleys
grown drowning in bones yowling... crows bowing , gnomes shouting and thrones shrouding! where pile drivers tear wild riders... and
stiff chilling glands left drilling lands cough up mans dream but choke soundly!

pessimistic verses optimism over pressurized heart throb covenants, stunned when glitch ' punishes the love in it with no oven mitt ...but epic visions merge with logic's emblem clover measured by Star Pods sunken ships....

til radio waves fading long days, exaggerate immense propaganda in elusive dialogue... on a isle amok filed on slots' of vile robot' child's just lost!
staining propane tanks aging drone base... as shady souls plague ...hanging domain chains of raining bolts waged!

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Post  Le0 on Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:54 pm

wb bredren *dapz* I know exactly where ya comin' from bro. Here's to a successful 2013 *toasts* & *lights up the cosmic grass* You & Sun puttin' me in a good place right now with the scripts...

while the cadence allegro of tiny mouses heart echos in the twigs...


Ethos within the skids... metronomes & pyramids
Meditation in the sesshin
When in my zone you gettin' did let alone splittin' wigs
Restoration in the lesson

Left to roam acrylic grids inject the poem it's liquid fizzed
Deprivation in the essence
The bread invokes Myth in the lids... digest the song & riddled gigs
Perspiration in the effervescence

Hittin' cigs... scented figs
Then I whiz, Blend my pics
When eye bridge, Guan Yin's daughters love & I kiss

Tintin' bliss... pilgrimage
In my mix, zen iris
Benign Osiris, I'm summonin' auras of Horus & Isis

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Re: Freestyle Production

Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:25 pm

MrJay83 wrote:All the best in 2013. Fam!!! Had to take a month out, you know how it is..life got us gasping for air and fighting for bread crumbs...lol.!! But Fam gots love, alwayz!!!

ight..let me join the festivities..

hanging domain chains of raining bolts waged!

Like we and Dr. Franky on the same page,
monster snare, tooth glare, like the open string
Tommy gun autotune automatic Van Helen raising
Sin city whipping sinners to dance Kazachok
on Molotov jelly gasoline decorated stages,
the frantic Fantastic bungalow of last drunk man
standing...

Obviate the sun and moon colliding, heading to the Titans lyceum
for a lecture on Coliseum verterbre snapping, tapping into meaning
of eo ipso, while stuck on jagged rocks like Monte Cristo..

Taking chili dips to wash away the ashes in my mouth,
the Colonist of Terra Nova irregularis, yet WE the People
know the freedom is the just cause, the stuff pioneers create
and legions keep clean, the breath of pulsar, the birth of
hope, for the sake of Sake a good, goodnight companion, on
On the night sky mighty eagle is spreading his wings
while the cadence allegro of tiny mouses heart echos in the twigs...


damn u spit some hardcore scripts here, Nice to see u back in action spitting that ether... took some time off too so i feel ya on that, but always inspiring to see your level of skill and unorthodox pyro... much respect
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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Wed Jan 23, 2013 7:27 pm

Le0 wrote:wb bredren *dapz* I know exactly where ya comin' from bro. Here's to a successful 2013 *toasts* & *lights up the cosmic grass* You & Sun puttin' me in a good place right now with the scripts...

while the cadence allegro of tiny mouses heart echos in the twigs...


Ethos within the skids... metronomes & pyramids
Meditation in the sesshin
When in my zone you gettin' did let alone splittin' wigs
Restoration in the lesson

Left to roam acrylic grids inject the poem it's liquid fizzed
Deprivation in the essence
The bread invokes Myth in the lids... digest the song & riddled gigs
Perspiration in the effervescence

Hittin' cigs... scented figs
Then I whiz, Blend my pics
When eye bridge, Guan Yin's daughters love & I kiss

Tintin' bliss... pilgrimage
In my mix, zen iris
Benign Osiris, I'm summonin' auras of Horus & Isis

damn my nigga pulled out the mythology too, LOL hot material here seems like this place is heating up quickly but Im a keep it going...

"Im summonin auras of Horus and Isis"

in the skies republic court guns bust chorus chants silent
and the lush
grand gust of
Wind spins up times unjust fringe as Flora just morphs up dead violets...

In the Palace of Nyx balance uplifts a malice from glitched radical prince with a chalice of myth, galloped from fritz of ailments amiss whaled astonished!

then merry thoughts concord, fairy goblins warp.... in hairy monstrous doors... wearing coffins for leery spawns in orb... as snake kings great hiss, wakes Greek spaceships, in daydream matrix shading graces , aiming faceless , staining pagans... in flaming ancient , tangy sacred ..preying veins split' gangrene aged skin .fading aimless when trading blades with Ares God of War...

having a death plague where sagging sweat hangs
badly unless waves tear blasting fleshed quakes

til ya remove the sheath elude snuffed sheiks on amused palmed peaks
twist the sword , flip ashore..the bricks of scorn... memos formed , windows forged symbols harp, trying to slide through and slay the Minotaur in its vivid wake of mystic gorge then its quickened wicked fortress becomes demon til lights orbit recons from deep thoughts beyond.... picking portraits of stiffened arms gripped but rigor mortis, then hot lead shakes in' breaks limbs they drop dead like a chick so Gorgeous!
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Sun...

Post  Le0 on Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:14 am

HeavenSunArcadez wrote:
Le0 wrote:wb bredren *dapz* I know exactly where ya comin' from bro. Here's to a successful 2013 *toasts* & *lights up the cosmic grass* You & Sun puttin' me in a good place right now with the scripts...

while the cadence allegro of tiny mouses heart echos in the twigs...


Ethos within the skids... metronomes & pyramids
Meditation in the sesshin
When in my zone you gettin' did let alone splittin' wigs
Restoration in the lesson

Left to roam acrylic grids inject the poem it's liquid fizzed
Deprivation in the essence
The bread invokes Myth in the lids... digest the song & riddled gigs
Perspiration in the effervescence

Hittin' cigs... scented figs
Then I whiz, Blend my pics
When eye bridge, Guan Yin's daughters love & I kiss

Tintin' bliss... pilgrimage
In my mix, zen iris
Benign Osiris, I'm summonin' auras of Horus & Isis

damn my nigga pulled out the mythology too, LOL hot material here seems like this place is heating up quickly but Im a keep it going...

"Im summonin auras of Horus and Isis"

in the skies republic court guns bust chorus chants silent
and the lush
grand gust of
Wind spins up times unjust fringe as Flora just morphs up dead violets...

In the Palace of Nyx balance uplifts a malice from glitched radical prince with a chalice of myth, galloped from fritz of ailments amiss whaled astonished!

then merry thoughts concord, fairy goblins warp.... in hairy monstrous doors... wearing coffins for leery spawns in orb... as snake kings great hiss, wakes Greek spaceships, in daydream matrix shading graces , aiming faceless , staining pagans... in flaming ancient , tangy sacred ..preying veins split' gangrene aged skin .fading aimless when trading blades with Ares God of War...

having a death plague where sagging sweat hangs
badly unless waves tear blasting fleshed quakes

til ya remove the sheath elude snuffed sheiks on amused palmed peaks
twist the sword , flip ashore..the bricks of scorn... memos formed , windows forged symbols harp, trying to slide through and slay the Minotaur in its vivid wake of mystic gorge then its quickened wicked fortress becomes demon til lights orbit recons from deep thoughts beyond.... picking portraits of stiffened arms gripped but rigor mortis, then hot lead shakes in' breaks limbs they drop dead like a chick so Gorgeous!

My man these scripts are nice... Respect. Had me noddin' my head all the way through. afro

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Ayo bredren...

Post  Le0 on Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:19 am

MrJay83 wrote:
*Dapz* We putting some All Star Scripts Moves on here!!! Lol…It’s a true pleasure to create lines in company of super blessed and talented souls…Much luv & bless!!

then hot lead shakes in' breaks limbs they drop dead like a chick so Gorgeous!
Like we the kings of Scriptures and no one ever told us,
the tone of of crushing bones of the fallen, those before us,
The scars on the back of the Trojan horse, attached razor blades
that cut in the rhythm of morse codes.. The triumph of the
knee high Cezar… The roar of the crowd like a wounded lion,
yet the Zion still stands proud…

Monochromatic memories of Pont Neuf … The blue coats at Verdun,
hitting the gas on the Rocket bike, before the Huns come gushing…
the humanity flying on broken wings, during the stint, crushing
rocks, as the flocks of raven pass by.. The chopped Chopin echoes
in the cerebrum , locked jaws…the BBQ brawls… The ROC champion
in it for another round of Mad MaX running…
Feels like scholar alphabet nitro gunning..



Dope. Period. If this were a term paper, your first line (referred to as the hook to reel in the reader) you'd get an A+ cause this line right here had me from jump!

"Like we the kings of Scriptures and no one ever told us" <--- hip-hop quotable right there lol Man!!! that's an iLL ass line and form of truth... sorry that ish resonated lol afro You & Sun bringing it man...

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Post  Le0 on Thu Jan 24, 2013 12:09 pm

Feels like scholar alphabet nitro gunning...

Sigh, live from the timeless man cave my flow's cunning...
Palpable, laughable...

I, drive dumb the rhyme is can-sprayed, my I's glow funny...
Parables...gratitude...

I've summed the minus the man's paid... my dough's crummy...
Math the jewels, craft the Xu* (shoo)[emptiness]
My, hives hum'uh mindless strand-maze... cycle's calmly

When I write, the inner light
Begins my flight, entered site
Then I cite, the inward sight

In eyesight, the tenure's plight
Amends my gripe, centered like...
End my insight, the inert typed



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Re: Freestyle Production

Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Thu Jan 24, 2013 10:45 pm

MrJay83 wrote:
*Dapz* We putting some All Star Scripts Moves on here!!! Lol…It’s a true pleasure to create lines in company of super blessed and talented souls…Much luv & bless!!

then hot lead shakes in' breaks limbs they drop dead like a chick so Gorgeous!
Like we the kings of Scriptures and no one ever told us,
the tone of of crushing bones of the fallen, those before us,
The scars on the back of the Trojan horse, attached razor blades
that cut in the rhythm of morse codes.. The triumph of the
knee high Cezar… The roar of the crowd like a wounded lion,
yet the Zion still stands proud…

Monochromatic memories of Pont Neuf … The blue coats at Verdun,
hitting the gas on the Rocket bike, before the Huns come gushing…
the humanity flying on broken wings, during the stint, crushing
rocks, as the flocks of raven pass by.. The chopped Chopin echoes
in the cerebrum , locked jaws…the BBQ brawls… The ROC champion
in it for another round of Mad MaX running…
Feels like scholar alphabet nitro gunning..


dope write everything flowed together fluid yall are keeping me on my A game daily... writing hardcore beast material... feelings mutual feel blessed to be around two of worlds best writers... you and MythRa ... we gotta keep this going... much respect..
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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Fri Jan 25, 2013 12:12 am

Le0 wrote:Feels like scholar alphabet nitro gunning...

Sigh, live from the timeless man cave my flow's cunning...
Palpable, laughable...

I, drive dumb the rhyme is can-sprayed, my I's glow funny...
Parables...gratitude...

I've summed the minus the man's paid... my dough's crummy...
Math the jewels, craft the Xu* (shoo)[emptiness]
My, hives hum'uh mindless strand-maze... cycle's calmly

When I write, the inner light
Begins my flight, entered site
Then I cite, the inward sight

In eyesight, the tenure's plight
Amends my gripe, centered like...
End my insight, the inert typed


damn this was dope all the way through, them last too stanzas were way over the top... like Air above a skyscraper... multi meaning rhyming scheme was sick enough for 10 rehabs... lol Ima rock with u on this though... here we go...

"end my insight, the inert typed"

swift minds ignite a embers might
flint dynamite cuts tremors by
stiff siren lights sub-centered! Time
flips silent nights tough tempered spite!

anarchy spirals the lost kingdoms pinnacle,of mystic souls and such timid foes...
where imaged stone glares enriched bones..aired in vintage tones....
land marking final amok seasoned minted scrolls, printed so typical' in cryptic bold ..
to edge In , new essence embedded in shrewd message.... hand carving viral haunts off legion chemicals, heated physical... in keen sense digital! then Wit gets blown bridged pits get holes, twisted gents roam... and menaces stroll .... damned swarming cycles of launched beacons endless glow!

ambiance intolerable on voluptuous pathways
planting vicious sour notes around commune Bat caves

as a Jade sky cast such brave flight

intermediate host, and Avatars
that enter allegiance close and clash at dark
and render lenience so clans magnet heart!
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Post  Guest on Fri Jan 25, 2013 8:15 am

and render lenience so clans magnet heart!


so we ain't yet ready to depart in the fog of war,
the smug Pimp my life show, take off the hoodies, brake your
muzzles, and leash your beasts, so we can feast in our
carnivorous ways...

I want to open the Book of Revelation and
close the chapter on my designation....breathing
the act of desperation, luscious and seductive
sensation, like Cleos milk bath occupation,
like Adam biting the apple of succubus rotten to
the core predestination..


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Post  Le0 on Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:37 pm

the core predestination...

Or destined nations
Abhor [the] text kin placin'
In open-minded ideologies
Send potent lines said why he father's seeds
A chore blessed in patience

[I] blab lore stressin' equations
Add fo_r reinterpretation
Then note in rhymes re_d my ecology
Blend omens as I designed it, dye he polished frees
Coalescin' these patients

More or less when it's he they shun
Accord the rest then spit creeds a-maze-sun
Then quote in dimes spread [how] I be [droppin'] these philosophies
Fleas with the lottery, possibly they spotted me
The sword rests in waitin'

Transition... the trance mission got my hands sizzlin'
The vital spark glowin' while flora's formin'
Got planned decisions of grand visions
The final dart flowin' while aura's stormin'

As eye plot enhanced prisms that span fissions
The hydro's sparked showin' styles as orals storm in
In rants wishin' uh man's wisdom stop my man's [from] killin'
As I dye odes sharp to & fro'in with guile that's cordial in the warnin'

Shift gears, lift peers
Rip ears...with jeers
Drift nears, Smyth cheers

Gift rears, it's veered
Spliffs sheared, _Myth's cleared
The gist smeared, it's weird





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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Fri Jan 25, 2013 10:06 pm

Le0 wrote:the core predestination...

Or destined nations
Abhor [the] text kin placin'
In open-minded ideologies
Send potent lines said why he father's seeds
A chore blessed in patience

[I] blab lore stressin' equations
Add fo_r reinterpretation
Then note in rhymes re_d my ecology
Blend omens as I designed it, dye he polished frees
Coalescin' these patients

More or less when it's he they shun
Accord the rest then spit creeds a-maze-sun
Then quote in dimes spread [how] I be [droppin'] these philosophies
Fleas with the lottery, possibly they spotted me
The sword rests in waitin'

Transition... the trance mission got my hands sizzlin'
The vital spark glowin' while flora's formin'
Got planned decisions of grand visions
The final dart flowin' while aura's stormin'

As eye plot enhanced prisms that span fissions
The hydro's sparked showin' styles as orals storm in
In rants wishin' uh man's wisdom stop my man's [from] killin'
As I dye odes sharp to & fro'in with guile that's cordial in the warnin'

Shift gears, lift peers
Rip ears...with jeers
Drift nears, Smyth cheers

Gift rears, it's veered
Spliffs sheared, _Myth's cleared
The gist smeared, it's weird




The gist smeared, it's weird

haunted fearless near
flawless tears endeared
Goblin sneers twist piers
In daunts transparent year!

where aerial stealth plants its viola on the Nebula...
when flesh wounds comes... from intense vivid jet fuel cut...
and square burials melt canvased Beach cobras spawned on Vessels launched....
feeding them and appeasing quick metal lunch ... injecting and dissecting stiff wedging brands that are , rather infecting.. when a pinned up glared daring ghoul shells Canopy's coat of dawn in trebles sung....

a vulture is always in fogs way avoiding the annoying poachers... and universal bruteness wormholes human circles of musics purple beaut pitch fertile from roots drenched from putrid watery sluices... cause mockeries ruthless debauchery toothpicks... poverty blueprints... hollering useless..sovereignty jewels wished... but copper teeth shoot quick, robberies from cupid hovering prudent , conquering dooms twist... saying aloha to waning coronas... and embedded in lethal resident evil of evident winged hoax pledged within Regal! pelicans steam boat elegant Heroes on delicate sea coast nailed In placebo!
and Sun cultures live dawn days with raw taste just noising pompous oily coasters...

the hottest franchise, modest implied in thy grand prime.. amps fry..and I hear ...quite clear Mans sigh... foxes Ram by... squadrons tan hides... but boxed In Sands/Time.. I'm the bomb when I Landmine!

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words thrill minds! super thoughts
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Post  Le0 on Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:47 pm

Earth feels my Future Shock!

Inert, still... it suits my plot
Be the type to meditate
I been terse, ill... myth loops fly spots
To me it's aight 2 levitate

80's Kid, high-tops Ladies with back catchin' eye-shots
Aint nothin' like a beautiful woman... nice scene & fly myth now knowin'
An array of pics, tie-knots, slip... doubt that relaxin' like'a cyclops
Aint nothin' like the views I be flowin' dreamin' with one eye open

Shout out to my Pops, seain' clear now like eye-drops what the pen do in service
Assert this 2 nourish those with refurbished prose
What I drop can rotate universes as I'm in tune with purpose
Sun God's resurgence glows then burns his clothes

Though the truth looms in searches thoughts stay consumed in verses
Vaults on zoom as I platoon the merchants as cocoons of the earth split


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Post  Le0 on Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:14 pm

Vaults on zoom as I platoon the merchants as cocoons of the earth split

As saloons include persons who's tools flashed...blurt clips
Scribbling vagile modes well-disposed
Good as perch fish, the burst fits this brash...unrehearsed filth
Sentencing agile flows that meld in rows

What's worse, the first spit or the curses that passed...come reversed with
Replenishing that's mad wild when exposed that's hell enclosed
Versions of sermons where vermin are submerged in whirlwinds it's curtains
Imaging the bad file scrolls that fail codec codes

Then worsens as ferment comes urgent disturbance is worded a pertinent deterrence
Loud style smells, hold that nose, Heisman frontrunner, hold that pose
Jeru's detergents serve servants this blurred pic of subservience I urge they don't deserve this
Lag my loads as path I chose stabs notebooks gross with gabs I spoke laugh, float

*Ghost*
For cookie-cutter people, what ink drips is lethal
Floatin' over each jewel... I don't even need the sheets dood...




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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:55 pm

[quote="Le0"]Vaults on zoom as I platoon the merchants as cocoons of the earth split

As saloons include persons who's tools flashed...blurt clips
Scribbling vagile modes well-disposed
Good as perch fish, the burst fits this brash...unrehearsed filth
Sentencing agile flows that meld in rows

What's worse, the first spit or the curses that passed...come reversed with
Replenishing that's mad wild when exposed that's hell enclosed
Versions of sermons where vermin are submerged in whirlwinds it's curtains
Imaging the bad file scrolls that fail codec codes

Then worsens as ferment comes urgent disturbance is worded a pertinent deterrence
Loud style smells, hold that nose, Heisman frontrunner, hold that pose
Jeru's detergents serve servants this blurred pic of subservience I urge they don't deserve this
Lag my loads as path I chose stabs notebooks gross with gabs I spoke laugh, float

*Ghost*
For cookie-cutter people, what ink drips is lethal
Floatin' over each jewel... I don't even need the sheets dood...



[/quote

DAMN , U WENT HAM ON THESE LAST TWO FREESTYLES... YOUR WORDPLAY WAS OUT OF THIS WORLD AND WITH THEM POWERFUL SIMILES AND METAPHORS MIXED WITH FLOW DELIVERY AND POWERFUL PUNCHLINES, U KEPT IT ROCK SOLID 4:20 LIKE A T-ROCK ALBUM LOL.... HIGHLY IMPRESSED AS ALWAYS U DELIVER UNMATCHED LEVELS OF SKILL AND DETAIL... I GOTTA ROCK WITH U THOUGH... SO HERE WE GO


"FLOATIN OVER EACH JEWEL , I DONT EVEN NEED THE SHEETS DUDE"


OMENS COASTER EVES POOL, WHILE LONE VEGANS SWEET THE STREET SHROOM
GOLD TRIMS FOLDER GREEK GHOULS, WILD COHESIVE GREED OF STEEP DOOM
COLD WINDS HOLSTER SLEEK DUELS, PSYCHO THESIS BEAM UNLEASHED CRUEL
SMOKE IN TOASTERS BRING RULE, IN VITAL ECLIPSED GREEN OBESE HUES

WHERE STORMS EMBER , THE LAIRS OF TORMENTORS AND TEAR THORN TREMORS IN GLARES OF ORANGE ENTERED, DARES ARE ARM BENDERS, SNARES CUT CHARMS SPLENDOR AND AIR GUST SOAR GINGER....

AS FISHERMAN ECHO RIPPLES TO THE FOGGY GATES, WHERE SMOG REPLAYS WEIRD STOCKY PHASE OF JEERED HAUNT DREAMSCAPES... ON TERRA'S FORMING FROM SCARAB SWARMING TERRITORIES OF CHERISHED STORIES OF MERIT ARMIES, CARATS MOURNING, PERISHED FOUR LEAFS ... LYRICS FORMING FROM FEARLESS WARNINGS. OF TEAR DRIPS FLOORING VEERED BLITZ SCORCHING....

MELLOW BUT WELL KNOWN, WHALE CHOKE ON TRAILED BOAST, HAIL SNOWS UP PALE ROWS, OF YELLOW BUDS AILED ROSE.... WHILE SCALED BONES CRUSH GRAIL STONES... NAILED FEROCIOUS IN STALE SLOPES OF QUAILED FERTILE HYMNS FROM THE SUMMONED CELLO!



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Post  Le0 on Wed Jan 30, 2013 3:01 pm

QUAILED FERTILE HYMNS FROM THE SUMMONED CELLO!

Comin' ghetto, an ethos of common echo
Theoretical melodies... that's medical in elegies
Ominous gecko...numinous the etched flow
Leo's medic approach embedded debriefs; maxed ebb & flow in requiems

That bellows prominent grotesque folds
Eel electrical pedigrees, attackin' several symmetries
Of sonic flicks that admonish it's a bonded twist
& he'll let it go readily... in fact bled it though as Elohim

From a lama Myth's the thunder's hiss,<- comma fist
Geometrical yellow gleams... string theory's japedo when wedgin' feeds
Bomb ya pics with trauma's tense done calm or skitched
Reel developed cold:an epic freeze matched by bredren's scrolls in three dreams

Palm the skits like psalms in scrips' adversaries are blown ta'bits
Come dumb with spits like when comets hit, to vomit this; an unwanted risk

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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Wed Jan 30, 2013 10:04 pm

Le0 wrote:QUAILED FERTILE HYMNS FROM THE SUMMONED CELLO!

Comin' ghetto, an ethos of common echo
Theoretical melodies... that's medical in elegies
Ominous gecko...numinous the etched flow
Leo's medic approach embedded debriefs; maxed ebb & flow in requiems

That bellows prominent grotesque folds
Eel electrical pedigrees, attackin' several symmetries
Of sonic flicks that admonish it's a bonded twist
& he'll let it go readily... in fact bled it though as Elohim

From a lama Myth's the thunder's hiss,<- comma fist
Geometrical yellow gleams... string theory's japedo when wedgin' feeds
Bomb ya pics with trauma's tense done calm or skitched
Reel developed cold:an epic freeze matched by bredren's scrolls in three dreams

Palm the skits like psalms in scrips' adversaries are blown ta'bits
Come dumb with spits like when comets hit, to vomit this; an unwanted risk

alright man lets keep it fired up... lets go..

"come dumb with spits like when comets hit, to vomit this: an unwanted risk"

once dominant plights spin continents, fumes covenant dams cut/bludgeoned rip
stunned cosmic strips widen politics , through obelisk chants abundance flipped...
Monks ominous hyphened solvent prints, gloom monument lands jut dungeon Nyx
provocative diamonds caulked in mist, rune sonnet scripts that just summon Pits

late bells from stained smells arbitrate the darkest day of carved delay... parked away in large estates of gargling sprays... hard belief strays and harmonies waves ...star humming lakes, marsh muddy flakes... hard lucking grace... born stumbling pace... parched sunning rains, arc of spring glaze... war strong knees break... armed but ease shakes.. dormant cheeks grazed... karma's genes phased, sword strut erased, morgue haunts relayed , gorge stunts steam based... hordes of streamed flames soared up eves maze.. then doors shut dream's fade...

ray guns weather fast, in severed math wearing a tearing jesters laugh... measures mass of peppered tracks... of flesh burnt gas.... vectors smash... zephyrs dash and leopards clash... in deserts ash ... wake comes' pressures pass... quakes rung' feathers snapped.. freights run' gestures crack sanctums thresher acts of the war magician to start religion releasing his demeaning fritz/ CHAOS SCEPTER BLAST... to wane off headers hatched...

wobbling concrete from chomping monkeys.... squawking on palmed beach... fondly drawing chalk scenes.. to the tune up an raw beats mocking... falsely stalking ...coughing honey... daunting abruptly ...pausing hungry... flaws sweep junkies.. calls keep coming... laws eat dummies... sloth cremes flunkies... dawns kings drumming... straw beams shunning hawking rumblings from logic's body of faucets dropping comic sprawling... of kamikaze!

MODERN POSSE STAPLING CONFESSIONS, SUFFERS UNLEASHED FROM FATAL OPPRESSIONS .. COPPER POPPING SHADY CONS PRESENCE... WHILE WATERED HOT SPRINGS ARE WAKING A LEGEND!
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Post  Le0 on Thu Jan 31, 2013 11:12 am

Right here is when I give you the up most respect; these lines I was feeling all the way through:

"...star humming lakes, marsh muddy flakes... hard lucking grace... born stumbling pace... parched sunning rains, arc of spring glaze... war strong knees break... armed but ease shakes.. dormant cheeks grazed... karma's genes phased, sword strut erased, morgue haunts relayed , gorge stunts steam based... hordes of streamed flames soared up eves maze.. then doors shut dream's fade..."

Ish I'm going thru at the moment... those resonate man *dapz* overall all of it's dope but those stood out the most... Again you bringing it, I appreciate that.

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Post  Le0 on Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:06 pm

Aight, keep that goin'...

WHILE WATERED HOT SPRINGS ARE WAKING A LEGEND!

*Lights up smoke*

{Sunnet}
Partakin' in said whim
Facilitated ruminations
Achin', may sketch in
Placid reiterated ululations

A regimen worth tellin' kin
As plasmas changed, retinas frame
A ledger's vent birthed in gellin' lens
Flash bulbs aimed correct in'a pane

A letter meant ta' search unveilin' fringe
Prestige unleashed as vestige increased
[As]Day settle's in, perched & developin'
Left seeds from sheets as pad's best creeds end each

Creative visualization
Sedative... miniscule phrased prong...


{Limerick}
Then begin again, beast
Telekinetic adrenalin...fleets
Engraved it's Myth's capacious capabilities
Then pasted shifts in veracious states of nihility
Welded pellet-eclectic, retention's leavened blend...feast

Done stressin' tinge, tactical appendixes
Confessin' kens, practical appendages
Paragraph's dictated spread in peeked squall's proclivities
Pharaoh's wrath fixated lettin' equals go flowed histories
Koans blessin' limbs, [the] factual apprentice sigs

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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Thu Jan 31, 2013 7:06 pm

Le0 wrote:Right here is when I give you the up most respect; these lines I was feeling all the way through:

"...star humming lakes, marsh muddy flakes... hard lucking grace... born stumbling pace... parched sunning rains, arc of spring glaze... war strong knees break... armed but ease shakes.. dormant cheeks grazed... karma's genes phased, sword strut erased, morgue haunts relayed , gorge stunts steam based... hordes of streamed flames soared up eves maze.. then doors shut dream's fade..."

Ish I'm going thru at the moment... those resonate man *dapz* overall all of it's dope but those stood out the most... Again you bringing it, I appreciate that.

MUCH APPRECIATED, MY MIND GOES IN THE ZONE AND THE REST IS HISTORY... I AM HAPPY THAT I DID WRITE SOME SCRIPTS U CAN RELATE TOO AND ARE GOING THROUGH BECAUSE THOSE ARE THE ONES THAT REALLY HAVE THE EFFECT ON US.. BUT OF COURSE ALL THE SCRIPTS U PLACE TOGETHER THEM BARS BE GOING OVER MY HEAD LIKE I WAS UNDER A JUNGLE GYM... BE HAVING TO SIT AND TAKE IT IN SLOWLY... CAUSE I GOTTA FAST PACED MIND... AND I GOTTA LEARN TO SLOW IT DOWN A BIT SO I CAN CAPTURE TRUE MEANING OF MASTERPIECES. BUT ITS GOOD THAT WE INSPIRE EACHOTHER... WISH WE HAD RAN INTO EACHOTHER YEARS BACK.... THEN WHO KNOWS WHERE I MIGHT BE NOW... HOWEVER GRATEFUL TO BE IN THE PRESENCE OF SUCH AN INTELLIGENT SUPER-SOPHISTICATED MIND LIKE YOURS... MUCH RESPECT TO U ALWAYS...
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Post  HeavenSunArcadez on Thu Jan 31, 2013 8:22 pm

Le0 wrote:Aight, keep that goin'...

WHILE WATERED HOT SPRINGS ARE WAKING A LEGEND!

*Lights up smoke*

{Sunnet}
Partakin' in said whim
Facilitated ruminations
Achin', may sketch in
Placid reiterated ululations

A regimen worth tellin' kin
As plasmas changed, retinas frame
A ledger's vent birthed in gellin' lens
Flash bulbs aimed correct in'a pane

A letter meant ta' search unveilin' fringe
Prestige unleashed as vestige increased
[As]Day settle's in, perched & developin'
Left seeds from sheets as pad's best creeds end each

Creative visualization
Sedative... miniscule phrased prong...


{Limerick}
Then begin again, beast
Telekinetic adrenalin...fleets
Engraved it's Myth's capacious capabilities
Then pasted shifts in veracious states of nihility
Welded pellet-eclectic, retention's leavened blend...feast

Done stressin' tinge, tactical appendixes
Confessin' kens, practical appendages
Paragraph's dictated spread in peeked squall's proclivities
Pharaoh's wrath fixated lettin' equals go flowed histories
Koans blessin' limbs, [the] factual apprentice sigs

hELL YEA MORE OF THAT ETHER... LAST STANZA WAS POWERFUL... SEEMS LIKE WE LIGHTING THIS PLACE ON FIRE... ALRIGHT ROCKING WITH U... HERE WE GO

"koans blessin limbs the factual apprentice sigs"

proton messages stun casual hacked synthesis
photon essences unravel blackened trenches
soul khan testaments just scrabble flags limitless
troll pawns recklessness haunts castle flats quints in spritz

quantum leaps call up grief, when walls shut bleak... walnuts peak and saw dust leaks... August leaf's . gnaw lumped streams of solemn priest... raw/cut streak of jaw stunned speech....but awesomely all stunts reek of straw country ... smog wandering bogs thundering in pause wondering is dawn suffering from sloth buffering or thoughts unseen.!

gross nightmares embed frenzy on collapsed paradoxical theories
drone dry stares send heads twisting but snow caps air mad toxic bolts sneering
stoned flies snare in sets sending console flaps Terra obstacles weirdly
gnome tribes barren glyphs chimney palmed smokes vast flare of comical veering


where water moccasins, devours halls condemned,
covered in pompous sins, til flowers sprawl again!


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Post  Le0 on Fri Feb 01, 2013 5:20 pm

Nothing but gratitude from the both of you. We got a good vibe going here & I do appreciate the efforts fellas.

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Post  Le0 on Fri Feb 01, 2013 6:04 pm

doing that Mushu stare...

Who's who, moves prove fair...
Threaded arachnology
New shoe glare, whoosh thru there
Dead it if you not following me

Suits my air, dew spews layered
Prophetic topology
My crew boosts lair
Pros at it yep, obviously

With foolproof flairs
Poetics dropped modestly
That removes noose bared
Go get it; P.o.p.s' philosophy...

A brewed swoosh aired
Like voodoo's snare...


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