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Post  unknownpoet2u on Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:04 pm

If

If I could be yours …and you forever mine

If I had a choice of what I wanted to be in this world

Still existing in a world with you in time

I would want to be a tear… born within your eyes

That pain cleanser of the heart… dwelling in the window of your soul

Living heavenly upon your cheek… falling from your nose

The further down I dwell… a closer to an ending I meet

Drifting down to your lips… my life comes to an end

If I could be yours …and you forever mine

To be without you… a nonexistent life

A sin to my heart… a sin

If
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A DANCE by Unknown

Post  unknownpoet2u on Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:08 pm

A Dance

Love grows and deepens …finding that way to move together

A slow and graceful dance

Step by step… rhythm, beat by beat

Feet lifted off the ground… floating on air

Hand in hand… bodies pressed together as we stand

Learning with a test of circles and dips

So much going on inside… so much deeply to share

A dance upon a cloud within the darkness of the universe

Eyes locked with a space… between our lips

Moving closer to that place called heaven

A dance to perfect… needs to be rehearsed

Embracing each other… turn

Holding ourselves together but losing every part of ourselves within each other's soul

Learning more of each other by a touch

Realizing for a long time… we are whole… one

A dance… to music that isn't there

The beats of our hearts together will lead you into an every lasting dance

A dance that can only begin when you pretend
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Post  Felicia on Wed Jun 06, 2012 9:22 am

You made this piece dance. Quite a intimate encounter between to souls that are in love. In my mind, dancing is similar to making love. ( When done write.)

Very eloquent piece.


If

If I could be yours …and you forever mine

If I had a choice of what I wanted to be in this world

Still existing in a world with you in time

I would want to be a tear… born within your eyes

That pain cleanser of the heart… dwelling in the window of your soul

Living heavenly upon your cheek… falling from your nose

The further down I dwell… a closer to an ending I meet

Drifting down to your lips… my life comes to an end

If I could be yours …and you forever mine

To be without you… a nonexistent life

A sin to my heart… a sin

If

A forbidden love? Or unattainable? Or, both?!

I merged your two threads to make one blog for ya! Very Happy
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Love and Dancing

Post  unknownpoet2u on Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:55 pm

you are so right dancing and loving make are similar in the hormony of moving and turning to the tune of someone else. You may not always lead but that is fine because you trust the one you are with

Felicia wrote:You made this piece dance. Quite a intimate encounter between to souls that are in love. In my mind, dancing is similar to making love. ( When done write.)

Very eloquent piece.


If

If I could be yours …and you forever mine

If I had a choice of what I wanted to be in this world

Still existing in a world with you in time

I would want to be a tear… born within your eyes

That pain cleanser of the heart… dwelling in the window of your soul

Living heavenly upon your cheek… falling from your nose

The further down I dwell… a closer to an ending I meet

Drifting down to your lips… my life comes to an end

If I could be yours …and you forever mine

To be without you… a nonexistent life

A sin to my heart… a sin

If

A forbidden love? Or unattainable? Or, both?!

I merged your two threads to make one blog for ya! Very Happy
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Brutha Unknown...

Post  Le0 on Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:10 pm

Very nice@ A dance.
I like the possiblities in this piece.
Envisioning 2 people in unison like planets orbiting the sun.

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