Freestyle Production

MrJay83 wrote:Niceness Sun!! It's always a true pleasure to vibe with your spirit...the lines you create resonate deep within the essence of my soul...

Let me add more fireworks...

missiles on Antical rippled Botanical!

They crushed the Satanical sacrilege of Sabbatical
tutelage of Prime directive, lets put things in their
true perspective...The El Shaddai cleaned the
Urukai like soul... Scorched and forged in the valley of sin
under the sign of Yin seeking the path to enlightenment,
like thirsty man drinking from the
dog water bowl, last call to Repent city....ticket to
salvation with lemon connotation...

Tapping the feet while listening to haiku beat,
cruising the streets of ghost town commonly
know as Gary, Indiana, while Carlos Santana
guitar gently weeps for a black magic woman,
black magic cure, to endure the age of Hey Joe
mentality where duality of mind and body
wreaks havoc to young population, using
hawk to stipulate, ice to manipulate
the dream catcher connection....
Seeking the first come last introspection...
The bilocation detection of the monk
with hidden smirk...to breathe..what a perk...

you sick with it yourself, like u have endless hard punches and references... and come with that unorthodox ether on every line... rocking with u again lets do this...

"with hidden smirk..to breathe..what a perk"

religion surfs dew streams but alerts
fictitious whirlpools clean cut under
wickedness surged through dream strut wonders
vividness virtue wings up thunder!

timber wolves hunt the dire straits in concrete labyrinths of Neptune... where wet fumes of bare flesh wounds... press feuds.. to dead Moons... and insert gulfs Sun struck night or day... pass cinder pulped once thrust pikers lakes...crust hibernates and plucks fibers placed... as wedged gloom ratchets tombs, of magnet hues slashed into/ IN 2 blackened blue/black and blue tablet ruins... as render yaps bitter pulse up stun cried earthquake when conceit raves urban connect moves....

a monster in the slaughter house... that wont bother now..... an laughs cold water out...

tribulation on infiltration where treachery is cleverly weathering the measuring but never leaves!
stipulations gloss ventilation's aired severing with peppering levering up pleasures peak on treasured breeze!

so when coped zen and logic moves... props intrude... plots menu... flop ensues.. and watts trend mute... flawless youths call in troops, with lawless cruise spawned frisk too when prophets cue that big massive sonic Boom!

Le0 wrote:sup fellas...
when prophets cue that big massive sonic Boom!

Passive, hundred rooms
Pass it, chronic, shrooms
Dreamy...

Ad-lib... platonic ooze
The grass gives sonnets hues
Scene 3...

Placid yet demonic moods
Grasp myth's sun-lit looms
Seamy...

The brashest comments bloomed
As if tonic zoomed
Seen 3...

A past lived in comet's womb
Ash-figs of blunted vrooms
Screamed he...

Hash cigs... pungent plumes
Mask rifts in honest broods
Schemed Qi...

As mass rips, eye rummage tombs
Casket's contents groomed
Me...

whats up Myth ...smooth flow... rocking with ya... here we go

"Caskets contents groomed, King Me"

banished hobbits loop stringy
vanished lodge Inns through steamy
traction's coffin/coughing Flu sneezing
bats In malted Zucchini!

Blue Genies ...droop treaties of June seething... dune seeding...
crude meaning, food eating..prude readings and goose winging..
root feeding a new queen Bee
ghouls sneaking acute greetings
loose deities amused easily
noon cheating confused feeble breeze

with Javelin in hand on Airs Rock... where impaired shock... flares hot..dared crop... of snared locks ...unfair props... terror lost in saddled dimension where Con Heirs Rot....

eloped forensics hike venturous meadows... as render unsettles ...Gnats ember up kettles... and stale smoke morticians wide Icarus web holes... where oppressed souls.chair the vessels... on stairs of trekked rule!

No doubt my ninja, good to be back
cause at the end of the day I'm just a dunce...

At the end of the fray, rhymes crutch response
Adjust & launch, touched from brunt's
Clutched rolled blunts, so strong thus hit once
Encode the jaunts, implode from info scrolled in clumps

An ode that bumps, so fast it grows to lumps...rotating
Flow's aging, foes waging, war on those bathing, in loves caged ring
Days seem wavering, dazed... seen waiver's scene facing Abel's requiem
Those hating make-up populace like Maybelline, maybe a fable's theme...

Le0 wrote:maybe a fable's theme...

Make believe, maybe a changeling...
Exchange seams, exclaimed screams
Fate's perceived, lately creator's fling...
Yet explained weens constitute estranged means

And yes the lanes mean each moves in ways weaned
Pains me 2 see how we're programmed 2 survive while exploited
When the day's cream comes along in a paced cling
These stains breed Tao tiers so damned you were deprived vile text-coitus

Kinda hard to carry on a conversation with the ish we facing...
So Wu Shi Kong is where I place dreams, effacing
Thoughts racing as vaults encase schemes of ray beams tracing...
The things most amazing in a maze streamed from stems stimulating

Penetrating, invigorating, knockin' on door's corridors infiltrating
With accord indicating a sword so venerating the reward is simply amazing

whats up yall Heavens Sun is back, good to see the two masters of rhyme holding it down.. got something to add .. here we go

"with accord indicating a sword so venerating the reward is simply amazing"

When abhors vindicating bronze torso bends slurred manias recorded fencing strut daisies..
Rips concord instigating pawn mortals interchanging elite targets bending up chain links..
Vista tours image breaking off corals generating obese garments sprinting snuffed grey streams..
Inca shores ventilating mosque porcelain parading unleashed sparks vividly just flaming!

dancing on lily pads, while thrilling math.. is wheeling back chilly laughs...
gargling toast, and harpooning coast with startling ghost heart stoning host
Olympia reptilians waning moons, and waging ghouls On city slums left spilling grim
digital telepathy as ridicules epilepsy, bridges collect empathy twisted effects deaden siege!

a monster sheds the danger zone of epoch , shadowing the pillar caps and battling such silver backs... but copper heads cut banger tones concrete slot...

playing billiards with preying dealers.... as hourglass sands of time flower ash and rake up vines!

*dapz* Sun & Jay sup my ninjas... Scripts are dope, period. Lemmie add sumthin'
(Fair warning I got JellyBean with me here in spirit, vibin' off her vocab)

Little voodoo child acting smart....

Lit'll protrude thru tile, graff'in dart...
Pad-pen art, that had men's heart
In clasped hands as glass cans harped
His last plans sharp,
The riddle behooved true style slant when sparked...

Aight let's start, fowl rants-twitter
Ghost face, evolve around science ninja
Wild chants flitter
Most rates involved noncompliance in the...

Ongoing suffrage, puff cig as beat's terrific
In rapport the views demonstrate
Koan flowing love's sig... that's beatific
Insupportable, to them: cant relate

Previse the lessons revise ya essence
I'm talking course, not stalking-horse
Realize the message, reeled wise, blessed since
Rhymes chalked scenes of sorts; a walking corpse...

Meme schemes, done in forts, it's
Part of focus, in my fortress
Inflorescence when the orchids
Hit the frontal lobes kid & grow to orchards

Hit the frontal lobes kid & grow to orchards

Or, flow thru words... that bloom
Usin' the mental or men's tool
When I groove I attract moons
Spat doom from taprooms

I'm like what that prove-nada
All that brouhaha
From the school of who shot'cha
Fall back you no shotta
I write moods that'll stop the
Fools spiteful views as a muse my ammo's proper

Finished jewels, finish you in epic rates
While I'm trynna replicate each piece full with ingenuity
When it's spooled it fumes; defecate... split in 2, decollate
Style fine kinda, I meditate 2 keep peaceful, myth's blend in purity

Blend ken fluently, catchy yet bland...my encumbrance
Engine's fluid steams, catch me if ya can... my pen's from France

Le0 wrote:Hit the frontal lobes kid & grow to orchards

Or, flow thru words... that bloom
Usin' the mental or men's tool
When I groove I attract moons
Spat doom from taprooms

I'm like what that prove-nada
All that brouhaha
From the school of who shot'cha
Fall back you no shotta
I write moods that'll stop the
Fools spiteful views as a muse my ammo's proper

Finished jewels, finish you in epic rates
While I'm trynna replicate each piece full with ingenuity
When it's spooled it fumes; defecate... split in 2, decollate
Style fine kinda, I meditate 2 keep peaceful, myth's blend in purity

Blend ken fluently, catchy yet bland...my encumbrance
Engine's fluid steams, catch me if ya can... my pen's from France

Mr Jay and Mythra... both killing it with the sickening scripts... much respect and kudos to both... alright gotta jump back in ... here we go//

" engines fluid steams, catch me if ya can... my pens from France "

endless music streams sandy bricks of land , striped with command
splendid cupids breath jamming scents up dams , silenced from Man!
grimace blueprints freeze dandy hints rough ends vibrant once Ran
wicked pool pits reek ambiance cupped in virus cans!

Egyptian Anubis landslide debauchery in zephyr fields of monastery...
as comets bury' masked commentary ...in hacked solitary! where emission flares editions of rooted plants by sketched slaughtering when threshers wheel up crossed contraries!relentless elusive evictions conclude in chants wide and altering/as tithe and offering endeavored still from botched canaries,an fog that carries thin feathers peeled from wind pressured chills gust voluntary of gas airing pumped sounds just daring amok that's tearing up contrast squaring contact on black cherry ..flats glaring!

The Bering Sea, is to (bearing see ) wearing grief ... on a snaring beach an when dawn comes its barely peace.. cause in odd sums its fairly peach...

ruthless cycles of prudent tidal's , high collide with recalcitrant phenoms
coolness white golds the mood when vital , dynamite splits canals in thrashed recon
human rivals jump moonlit rhinestones ,smiled demise when sweat fountains snatch freedom!
druid shrine boats congruent mind scrolls, finalize twitched afoul instantly palmed!

granite hills of canvasing steel triumph in epilogues of science
panic builds calamity thrills violin when kettles sauce tyrants

leaving grey zones on fibs of animalistic acts! (watch this)
meaning they wont commit (any malicious acts)

rest my case...

*dapz* Sun, *dapz* Jayeightthree

Welcome to the "Lost boyz" collective...

Keep that goin'... lost voids selective...
He peeps cats flowin'... the cost of ploys a chef gives
Vedic lapse, frozen, sauced noise intrepid
Or selected, the anecdotal perspective...

Respect is neglected when truth's not inspected
Like colonized exploitation
Write with solemn eyes the hexed coy mason
Board the sector, with frantic pro-tools, check the method

A peasant's essence
Hidden jewelry
A pleasant reference

Forbidden moor degree
The nascent crescents
Did in pooled decree

Nice scripts bredren, lemmie build wit'cha

how nice they blend...

He dyed b4 his time
He scribed e-ther; this timed
How nice the day ends
How lights portray tinge
We tried, he thor's & splits minds

Hints lined, whence... I'm
I am, primed *wince* signed
Dye a lamb diagram
Lion's hand Zion man
Mayan's slam, signs pinch spine

Quench with sent wine, numerical
Bent from myth's shine... nu-medical
Same thangs that's blessin' you beheaded fools
Estranged panes that's edible erected jewels
2 an extent the gift blinds... thru revenue

Le0 wrote:Nice scripts bredren, lemmie build wit'cha

how nice they blend...

He dyed b4 his time
He scribed e-ther; this timed
How nice the day ends
How lights portray tinge
We tried, he thor's & splits minds

Hints lined, whence... I'm
I am, primed *wince* signed
Dye a lamb diagram
Lion's hand Zion man
Mayan's slam, signs pinch spine

Quench with sent wine, numerical
Bent from myth's shine... nu-medical
Same thangs that's blessin' you beheaded fools
Estranged panes that's edible erected jewels
2 an extent the gift blinds... thru revenue

Mr Jay and Myth both coming with the nice wordplay... im digging it gotta jump in... here we go...

"2 an extent the gift blinds... thru revenue"

putrid revenge uplifts prides mute wretched fuse
mutants avenge bludgeoned shrine ghouls left in doom
hue glitched message commits cycled septic gloom
shrewd mist deadens sunken time holes kept immune
dew drips freshen dungeon limestone etched with fumes
humid wetness plugs swift cyclones set entombed
Moons embed innocent bright souls webbed into
bloomed glyphs wrecked when/wind gust twist vines so edible!

being a breathing Sun, and maestro at these fresco paintings
calculated in volumes matrix and calibrated handsome as a valid Maven

its cool running's down split glaciers ... among the oceans wavy surf... where day dreams births... and flares flame thee earth... of damned lairs pasting dirt... on land squares Hades cursed ... where Man's fading thirst of aiding words ..sends him in 'inflicted snares draped slaving purged! while igloo mummies douse in chaining birth, on zones unspoken reigning surged of preying germs!

tropical rain feathers spread out in celestial extravaganzas , where green pastures jade skies... follicle grain nectar's wet grounds with ailed blessings souled in strands of Gamma! in air speed faster than the shift between the mystic scene of shades night/and daylight!

rest my case... Arcadez the "Sun of Heaven"

puts these tired bones to rest...

Xylophones when blessed
With wired tones myth sketched
Reflects reflexed... Vietcong text
Litmus test, xmas missed us; be it pawns, chess

Cee it, qualm, mess... scenic, storms, threats

Seen it in forms less from formed beat breaks
Deep quakes heat states at elite rates
The preface he states when peeps lace the sheet's pace
It sneaks fakes in retakes the briefcase keeps papes like sweepstakes

Sticky purp we each grace...like we eat paste.... we each great now keep pace

Like we eat grapes for pete's sake cipher's emerge as we light up the herb...

Le0 wrote:Cadillac condition...

The babble back contention...
The battle cat, pun switchin'
That'll black, gone; I'm missin'

Rhyme's mission; Divine's kitchen
Where minds pitch in, dine when pitchin'
The kind that signs with linchpin... a crime when myth's in...

Ya area, causin' mass hysteria
The aria, pausin', blastin' steady kludge
Very blurred, lost in fastin' these deadly bugs

The melody's love, deposited hollow-tips
We posit blips of morrow's gifts
These collage's grid a college kid's deposit slips

and the sickness continues... we creating a new virus with all these sick scripts... kudos to both Mr Jay and Mythra... alright let me jump in... here we go

"These collage's grid a college kid's deposit slips'

steep astonishment demolishes ecomic blitz
geeked up colonist embalm spritzed greeds polished lens
street polagamist brick solid trending walled in fritz
Libra communist empolish envies politics!

A silverback maverick bring static quick to the magic styx, til rabbid fish... break off drained thoughts, in fragments ditched.. when sadness dips .. its tragic stench..

poachers landslide interplanetary meadows of synchronizing epilogue.... with no weapons drawn .. stepping on brimstone etched in fog.. of a destined bog...

miracles sparkle over a yearning living daylight ... where deviant blueprints collide with smogs windshield... as dearest quotes marble clovers of earthsea gemming rays bright... airing Egypts dew scents combined in glossness peeled!

botched motorhead's toting a desert eagle over a highway of supernova... til the future slows up... as sloths rover bed combs peace up in checkered steamboats bouldered up but cooler/coldcut!

sabrewolves play carnivores to mormon boars ..... as orchids soar.. forfeit mourns and doors get torn... from lost portals, of frost torsos ... as razors pull the vapors pool ... of glacier doom.... craters dull plains ...cause the art of war takes place in blank space on a carbon shore...!

rest my case.

Arcadez the Sun of Heaven

HeavenSunArcadez wrote:

Le0 wrote:Cadillac condition...

The babble back contention...
The battle cat, pun switchin'
That'll black, gone; I'm missin'

Rhyme's mission; Divine's kitchen
Where minds pitch in, dine when pitchin'
The kind that signs with linchpin... a crime when myth's in...

Ya area, causin' mass hysteria
The aria, pausin', blastin' steady kludge
Very blurred, lost in fastin' these deadly bugs

The melody's love, deposited hollow-tips
We posit blips of morrow's gifts
These collage's grid a college kid's deposit slips

and the sickness continues... we creating a new virus with all these sick scripts... kudos to both Mr Jay and Mythra... alright let me jump in... here we go

"These collage's grid a college kid's deposit slips'

steep astonishment demolishes ecomic blitz
geeked up colonist embalm spritzed greeds polished lens
street polagamist brick solid trending walled in fritz
Libra communist empolish envies politics!

A silverback maverick bring static quick to the magic styx, til rabbid fish... break off drained thoughts, in fragments ditched.. when sadness dips .. its tragic stench..

poachers landslide interplanetary meadows of synchronizing epilogue.... with no weapons drawn .. stepping on brimstone etched in fog.. of a destined bog...

miracles sparkle over a yearning living daylight ... where deviant blueprints collide with smogs windshield... as dearest quotes marble clovers of earthsea gemming rays bright... airing Egypts dew scents combined in glossness peeled!

botched motorhead's toting a desert eagle over a highway of supernova... til the future slows up... as sloths rover bed combs peace up in checkered steamboats bouldered up but cooler/coldcut!

sabrewolves play carnivores to mormon boars ..... as orchids soar.. forfeit mourns and doors get torn... from lost portals, of frost torsos ... as razors pull the vapors pool ... of glacier doom.... craters dull plains ...cause the art of war takes place in blank space on a carbon shore...!

rest my case.

Arcadez the Sun of Heaven

WoW... where do I begin...

"A silverback maverick bring static quick to the magic styx, til rabbid fish... break off drained thoughts, in fragments ditched.. when sadness dips .. its tragic stench..

poachers landslide interplanetary meadows of synchronizing epilogue.... with no weapons drawn .. stepping on brimstone etched in fog.. of a destined bog..."
^^^^^^^^^^^ Brilliance.

me thinks me gonna be sick lol

Le0 wrote:cause the art of war takes place in blank space on a carbon shore...!

With stank traits
The blank space
Becomes autumn's pore
As cauldrons pour
This dank taste
Columns gorge
As volumes soar
Thru rhythms forged...
Verism's chord
Walloped-struck
When visions formed
Intension's scorched
Follow-up with extention cords
Not to mention boards
The imprint of force
When hit
It scorns
The high-and-mighty
Like Afrodite's
Tits in 4's
Yet short-lived
Like a skit with scores

appreciate the love fam... i wrote it too fast think i had some typos at the beginning that i didnt pick up til later...but nice freestyle u put together too.. especially that Aphrodite line at the end that was killer... lol alright been long day but new morning... lets do this again...

"Like a skit with scores"

vitamins enforce
might of men endorsed
violent in scorched
vile winds sent chorused!

tribulations and epidemics , set the gimmicks for involuntary landmines... stipulations damn pessimistic's , threshed from mystic charms in solitary sand slides....

spider monkeys glide destinies awakening, reckoning adjacent weeps.... as cider
hungry flies pedigree a place indeed...on webs of kings that faded deep in ancient sleep...

raptors island' bringing rather tyrant ,kingpins to capture pirates and master might as... chapters diamond' faster tides when ,Vegan troops hamper giants that cancer silence!

dead genesis lanterns a force field of radiant stars.... blazing afar.. off radius charts!as dreads menaces camera more thrills on Accadian marks...raging when sparked from preying embarks!

tiptoeing gloom's dusk wonderland' solar sketched and over stretched like a bind up rubber band... Missiles bleed through the thunders strand ' as ulcers expand coast perplexed ' while hush smiles on watered dams...

until drugs kill, and vicious locust ram endless rows of rich peninsulas to insist lucks up!


Heavens Sun

HeavenSunArcadez wrote:

Le0 wrote:cause the art of war takes place in blank space on a carbon shore...!

With stank traits
The blank space
Becomes autumn's pore
As cauldrons pour
This dank taste
Columns gorge
As volumes soar
Thru rhythms forged...
Verism's chord
Walloped-struck
When visions formed
Intension's scorched
Follow-up with extention cords
Not to mention boards
The imprint of force
When hit
It scorns
The high-and-mighty
Like Afrodite's
Tits in 4's
Yet short-lived
Like a skit with scores

appreciate the love fam... i wrote it too fast think i had some typos at the beginning that i didnt pick up til later...but nice freestyle u put together too.. especially that Aphrodite line at the end that was killer... lol alright been long day but new morning... lets do this again...

"Like a skit with scores"

vitamins enforce
might of men endorsed
violent in scorched
vile winds sent chorused!

tribulations and epidemics , set the gimmicks for involuntary landmines... stipulations damn pessimistic's , threshed from mystic charms in solitary sand slides....

spider monkeys glide destinies awakening, reckoning adjacent weeps.... as cider
hungry flies pedigree a place indeed...on webs of kings that faded deep in ancient sleep...

raptors island' bringing rather tyrant ,kingpins to capture pirates and master might as... chapters diamond' faster tides when ,Vegan troops hamper giants that cancer silence!

dead genesis lanterns a force field of radiant stars.... blazing afar.. off radius charts!as dreads menaces camera more thrills on Accadian marks...raging when sparked from preying embarks!

tiptoeing gloom's dusk wonderland' solar sketched and over stretched like a bind up rubber band... Missiles bleed through the thunders strand ' as ulcers expand coast perplexed ' while hush smiles on watered dams...

until drugs kill, and vicious locust ram endless rows of rich peninsulas to insist lucks up!


Heavens Sun

" to insist lucks up "

fluid wisp nun-chuck
musics swift hum of
crucifix unsung
fumed in stench unjust!

parallel gravitational insomnia unleash shadow people! in pastels lethal as thin capsules of creme coat ,gene pulsed tree coast... reeked cold from green zones of evils free throw!
terror sails havoc's vacant omens, cropping Sun Struck flings paddling!

meteor crones testify elemental stars in vanquished laboratories.... ringing curse phones bedded flies ailment bone carved when faceless traps corpse up stories..of
seedy birthstones rectified til tales drug Minos marksmen tainted as karma's scorching...

cavemen trail blaze on post apocalyptic graveled sand strips... bandaged from damaged lungs and canvased plugs of granite launched...
stray lambs snail pace hot coals as mongrels witches babble chants in... scrabbled Spanish...

gross thought of complex similes... timidly ...swish the breeze of trinity....
ghost stalk amok infinity's ... as crows taunt abolished ministries... illustrating mimicking as peeled up phasing's finicky ... where imagery carried defining measures... and dares chemistry buried refining treasures...

purgatory penetrates a sorcery's genocides... burns ash morphine when inflates gut bordering zen alive..urn dust flurries ventilate up loitering kindle frights... as gentle sprites, ripple lite whistled kites into the gem blue crippled skies... churned on soaring frivolous plates of forgery in demise!

but devil monkeys .. embezzle dummies... and freckled flunkies ... as thresholds dump siege.....that french toast junkies... encroach hung trees... rinse mocha's heat... lynch cobra teeth and bend photon reach....

war hogs... blister off capsized life lessons... with strife embedded...as shore frost fissures combats rise while deadened in times grim message!

"tribulations and epidemics , set the gimmicks for involuntary landmines... stipulations damn pessimistic's , threshed from mystic charms in solitary sand slides....

spider monkeys glide destinies awakening, reckoning adjacent weeps.... as cider
hungry flies pedigree a place indeed...on webs of kings that faded deep in ancient sleep...

raptors island' bringing rather tyrant ,kingpins to capture pirates and master might as... chapters diamond' faster tides when ,Vegan troops hamper giants that cancer silence!"

^^^^^^^ All of it dope but those stanzas I felt the most; the way they flowed, content, word choice as well as imagery...


"meteor crones testify elemental stars in vanquished laboratories.... ringing curse phones bedded flies ailment bone carved when faceless traps corpse up stories..of
seedy birthstones rectified til tales drug Minos marksmen tainted as karma's scorching...

cavemen trail blaze on post apocalyptic graveled sand strips... bandaged from damaged lungs and canvased plugs of granite launched...
stray lambs snail pace hot coals as mongrels witches babble chants in... scrabbled Spanish...

gross thought of complex similes... timidly ...swish the breeze of trinity....
ghost stalk amok infinity's ... as crows taunt abolished ministries... illustrating mimicking as peeled up phasing's finicky ... where imagery carried defining measures... and dares chemistry buried refining treasures..."

^^^^^^^^ Same with these lines; like the way you flip concepts into mental pics... overall I'm feelin' both fam. I do appreciate the contributions as always.

Le0 wrote:"tribulations and epidemics , set the gimmicks for involuntary landmines... stipulations damn pessimistic's , threshed from mystic charms in solitary sand slides....

spider monkeys glide destinies awakening, reckoning adjacent weeps.... as cider
hungry flies pedigree a place indeed...on webs of kings that faded deep in ancient sleep...

raptors island' bringing rather tyrant ,kingpins to capture pirates and master might as... chapters diamond' faster tides when ,Vegan troops hamper giants that cancer silence!"

^^^^^^^ All of it dope but those stanzas I felt the most; the way they flowed, content, word choice as well as imagery...


"meteor crones testify elemental stars in vanquished laboratories.... ringing curse phones bedded flies ailment bone carved when faceless traps corpse up stories..of
seedy birthstones rectified til tales drug Minos marksmen tainted as karma's scorching...

cavemen trail blaze on post apocalyptic graveled sand strips... bandaged from damaged lungs and canvased plugs of granite launched...
stray lambs snail pace hot coals as mongrels witches babble chants in... scrabbled Spanish...

gross thought of complex similes... timidly ...swish the breeze of trinity....
ghost stalk amok infinity's ... as crows taunt abolished ministries... illustrating mimicking as peeled up phasing's finicky ... where imagery carried defining measures... and dares chemistry buried refining treasures..."

^^^^^^^^ Same with these lines; like the way you flip concepts into mental pics... overall I'm feelin' both fam. I do appreciate the contributions as always.

appreciate the love, lol was going through a lot of emotions and felt i had to unleash em all... this is like my haven for getting all my personal thoughts out... your positive feedback encourages me to write more... its been awhile since i wrote any signature pieces but i have one im going to try doing soonest... btw your verses were sick on BP man.. checked em out and went over my head...u and Mr Jay be spitting unorthodox scripts with multiple meanings.. and admire that.. they need to get a stage for all 3 of us...and a crowd of 1000 that would be awesome.

HeavenSunArcadez wrote:

Le0 wrote:"tribulations and epidemics , set the gimmicks for involuntary landmines... stipulations damn pessimistic's , threshed from mystic charms in solitary sand slides....

spider monkeys glide destinies awakening, reckoning adjacent weeps.... as cider
hungry flies pedigree a place indeed...on webs of kings that faded deep in ancient sleep...

raptors island' bringing rather tyrant ,kingpins to capture pirates and master might as... chapters diamond' faster tides when ,Vegan troops hamper giants that cancer silence!"

^^^^^^^ All of it dope but those stanzas I felt the most; the way they flowed, content, word choice as well as imagery...


"meteor crones testify elemental stars in vanquished laboratories.... ringing curse phones bedded flies ailment bone carved when faceless traps corpse up stories..of
seedy birthstones rectified til tales drug Minos marksmen tainted as karma's scorching...

cavemen trail blaze on post apocalyptic graveled sand strips... bandaged from damaged lungs and canvased plugs of granite launched...
stray lambs snail pace hot coals as mongrels witches babble chants in... scrabbled Spanish...

gross thought of complex similes... timidly ...swish the breeze of trinity....
ghost stalk amok infinity's ... as crows taunt abolished ministries... illustrating mimicking as peeled up phasing's finicky ... where imagery carried defining measures... and dares chemistry buried refining treasures..."

^^^^^^^^ Same with these lines; like the way you flip concepts into mental pics... overall I'm feelin' both fam. I do appreciate the contributions as always.

appreciate the love, lol was going through a lot of emotions and felt i had to unleash em all... this is like my haven for getting all my personal thoughts out... your positive feedback encourages me to write more... its been awhile since i wrote any signature pieces but i have one im going to try doing soonest... btw your verses were sick on BP man.. checked em out and went over my head...u and Mr Jay be spitting unorthodox scripts with multiple meanings.. and admire that.. they need to get a stage for all 3 of us...and a crowd of 1000 that would be awesome.

alright here we go again...

pictorial mind conception cast its labyrinth of deception
hickory coves hive connections that bend plagiarisms detection
memorials rhyme confession tactics anchored in such electives
hymn stories collide compression's wrapped in savored venom's inception

red wine drips like a water fall, cutting the stripes of cowards off...
sketched shrines wind pipe gust colorful , gutting stunned eyes just sour sloth!

timid thieves escort victory... but embellish prudent euphoria ...in Luke warming dusk..
gimmicks seize efforts tenderly..once grim tales hit mutant tombed cores deemed of...sizzled roaring wasp!

eccentric presence both electric an divine ... weathering hurricanes... as zephyrs stream urban maze ... trapped instant/left in stone wells stretched in grand demise~

alpha synthetic functions upload infinite gales of evolution... as maelstroms threats come fluid... and mounts of embedded dungeons unfold cemented trails gunned in metal fusion!

i rest my case... Heavens Sun